My name is Kristel and I'm 13 years old. My birthday is on the 18th of November so I will soon be 14 years old :). I study in seventh grade in Tallinna Ühisgümnaasium. I have studied English for three years and now it is the fourth year.
In free time I spend a lot of time with my friends. We have always a lot of fun!
Also I go to aerobics with my three classmates. It is three times a week. I like to draw, roller-skate, go to the cinema and swim, be with my friends, listen to the music, dance, take funny pictures and so on...
These are me and some of my friends.
I am the girl in the second row, the first on left.
In free time I spend a lot of time with my friends. We have always a lot of fun!
Also I go to aerobics with my three classmates. It is three times a week. I like to draw, roller-skate, go to the cinema and swim, be with my friends, listen to the music, dance, take funny pictures and so on...
These are me and some of my friends.
I am the girl in the second row, the first on left.
Welcome to English blogging, Kristel! You have a lovely introduction here, and the pictures, too!
ReplyDeleteNow, here are also some ideas how you can make this posting even better (use the 'edit' function to change it).
- For 'mina' in English, capital 'I' is used instead of 'i'. In some places you have used 'I' already, just in some places you can do the replacements.
- For writing your birthday, you can use the following formats: 18 November, November 18, the 18th of November. Please pick one :)
- In the 4th sentence, you need to add 'it' after 'now' and before 'is': '..and now it is the fourth year'. Please correct the spelling of 'fourth' as well - you have currently one letter missing.
- In the 8th sentence, 'kolm korda nädalas' is 'three times a week' - there is 'a' instead of 'in'.
- At the end of the last sentence, take away 'a' before 'funny pictures' - article 'a' is used only when you have words in singular (ainsus).
- In sentence 1 before the pictures - instead of 'my some friends', it is said 'some of my friends'
- In sentence 2 before the pictures - there should be 'the' before 'second' and 'first' - järgarvude ees kasutatakse artiklit 'the'.
Looking forward to your posting improvements. Let me know if you have any questions!